Some people think that the Olympics is no longer important in the 21st century. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the Olympics event is important or is no longer important. Personally, I strongly agree that the Olympics is a great platform to unite countries.
There is ample evidence that the Olympics is beneficial to the players and the hosting country. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, there are many talented athletes across the globe whose talent goes unnoticed. The Olympics provides a platform to such athletes to showcase their talents and achieve fame and recognition for themselves and their country. Also, sports events like the Olympics creates a great platform for rival country’s leaders to meet and create harmony and reduce political tension. For instance, the recent winter Olympics was used by President Donald Trump and Leader of North Korea to meet and diffuse the tense situation in the Korean Peninsula. Without these games, this would have been impossible.
The country that hosts the Olympics event, gains popularity and attracts tourists which in turn accelerates the per capita income of their economy. For example, recent empirical research by the UK Government demonstrated that the tourism industry of country’s that hosted the Olympics increased by 40% due to media showcasing the country’s major tourist attractions. Also, in order to organise such a big scale event the hosts country has to build infrastructure like stadium and transportation like metros, buses and trains which will in turn benefits the hosts country’s citizens. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that Olympics is just not an international sports event, but also has several benefits attached to it.
From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that, hosting Olympics is beneficial and should not be discontinued. It is predicted that the international sports events will increasingly grow in importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53378378378 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96829330711 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4687738032 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100302251257 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392954127331 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329670933187 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718606906659 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053809371584 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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