Environmental problems ore loo big for individual countries and individual persons for address. ln other words, we have reached a stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Time has come to unite for common cause irrespective of our Nation,state or continent. Imminent danger is waiting to gobble human civilization in form of Global warming, pollution. I definietly do not agree with the statement as environment protection is collective responsibility and cannot just rely on some imaginary governing body. Let me elucidate, some arguments for my bold response.
The phrase ''international level'' is itself relative term and cannot be used for rigid and standard body. Though we all are living on one Earth there are many regional and continental organisations and pacts. For instance we have European Union for all countries in Europe except Russia and NATO for countries like USA, Canada. Now we cannot give sole responsibility of protecting environment on any particular international institute or organisation. Anyhow, we have UNO which acts like international governing body for all international aspects. Inspite, when it comes to environmental issues implementing strict international pacts into municipal level is in complete control of member nations and states.
Infact,in many ecological problems like deforestation, encroachment of sea etc enforcement and influence of international bodies are minimal. Few months back Amazon forests are burned with support of local government and when the same was questioned by other countries and NGO's, the Prime Minister responded rudely. Hence, only with strong voice by people who all have concern against environment and support of local bodies we can bring change in attitude of politicians. Ofcourse, international bodies and agreements like G12 nations, UNICEF, UNEP are trying their level best for overall support for this universal cause.
Nevertheless, legal sanctions like membership restrictions, taking back economic support, giving incentives for countries which shows betterment are some of the methods that can be followed by international bodies for protecting environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , state
... common cause irrespective of our Nation,state or continent. Imminent danger is waitin...
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Suggestion: many regionals
...e all are living on one Earth there are many regional and continental organisations and pacts...
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...e control of member nations and states. Infact,in many ecological problems like...
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Suggestion: , in
...member nations and states. Infact,in many ecological problems like deforest...
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...ations and states. Infact,in many ecological problems like deforestation, ...
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...e by people who all have concern against environment and support of local bodies...
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...ho all have concern against environment and support of local bodies we can bring...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, nevertheless, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77133105802 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22298166377 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655290102389 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.000707065 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252966139805 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823515935182 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498488742411 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14960344587 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488050209891 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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