The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the whole world population in India, China, USA and Japan in 1950, 2002 and projections for 2050.
It is clear from the chart that the population of China consumed the highest features in the chart. Meanwhile, the population in Japan consumed the lowest point.
In 1950, the Indian reach 15%. Moreover, this feature increased slightly to about 17% in 2002, and is predicted to reach 19% in 2050. Additionally, the Chinese consumed by 23.5% of the total world population and reach it peak. However, the population of this country decreased dramatically to 20% in 2002. This number is predicted to fall sharply to 15% in 2050.
The population of USA in 1950 consumed only 7% of the total world population and this figure seem to be remain constant over the next 100 years.The Japanese consumed the lowest figure in the chart with only 3%, 2.75% in 1950 and 2002 respectively. This percentage is expected to go down to about 1.3% in 2050.
- The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. 56
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree wit 67
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 67
- The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. 67
- The proportion of single child families in cities outskirts and rural areas of China 1980 2000 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peaks'?
Suggestion: peaks
...the total world population and reach it peak. However, the population of this countr...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...remain constant over the next 100 years.The Japanese consumed the lowest figure in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83431952663 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67234290784 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.9759432868 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408306242762 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149652063402 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106399442475 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256907328219 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109514303087 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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