you work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
in your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to inform you that my recent problem with the internet connection which your company support that.
There are some difficulties with the internet like low-speed and some other disorders which cause that I could not be able to use some online applications or sites. Whenever I would like to use some applications like Skype, Gmail and etc. I encounter with an error frequently which exclude my accessibility and ask me to check my connection.
Since I work at home and I have to be in touch with my clients with online chat and video call, this matter makes some problem for me. I have customers from all over the world and because of time difference they should leave a message for me and I should check their order and answer their needs quickly. With this low-speed connection, I am not be able to service appropriately.
I would be really grateful if you could check my internet connection and tell me whatever I could do to solve this problem.
Yours faithfully,
Minoo Zafaryan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 231, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...use some applications like Skype, Gmail and etc. I encounter with an error frequently wh...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 347, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ith this low-speed connection, I am not be able to service appropriately. I ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89265536723 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70374254587 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3031388381 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26338100589 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108742482736 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853562019602 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164292419413 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083305375228 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.