Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Usage of shopping plastic bags, which takes a long time to get decomposed, result in pollution of environment. It is considered by some people that use of plastic bags should be banned. I completely agree with this view.
Although, plastic bags are easy to use, one should avoid using them considering their negative impact on the environment in the long run. Burning plastic bags releases harmful gases; inhaling these toxic gases leads to uninvited health issues. Moreover, consumption of plastic bags unknowingly by animals lead to their death. For example, the recent studies states, that death of animals due to consumption of plastic is increasing statistically every year.
Plastic wastage not only affect the species living on the earth, but also affects the species living inside the water. A teenage boy who was worried about the marine species developed a machine, which removes the plastic debris from the oceans. The amount of plastic materials collected from a small selected area on the ocean, shows that we have under-emphasized the repercussions of plastic usage. To take an example, fishes gets trapped by plastic bags and becomes pray for other large fishes.
Increasing the usage of paper bags, which do not take years to decompose, would help in controlling the utilization of plastic bags. The government should ban the usage of plastic bags, and should raise awareness of negative consequences on using plastic bags. If every individual provides their support to the government, in controlling the pollution caused due to plastic materials, within no time we could curb the plastic pollution.
In conclusion, cited evidences clearly states that usage of plastic bags ought to be banned promptly to save the environment from any further damage.
- Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event:1. Explain why you are interested in helping2. give details suitable past experience3. suggest ways you might help with the event 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31448763251 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74606732703 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0663405072 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237711246103 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916195409778 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922906889677 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145369473392 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852944820464 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.