In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Few people are having higher salaries around the globe. Some argue it is good for country’s economy while others believe government should control the salary income to an appropriate level. I believe, more earnings are needed for the world’s development and that to be not controlled to a certain level.
Getting a good earning prove the stability of the families economy earning without making any financial difficulties. Employees influence to achieve their job goals by aiming a good salary ultimately. Not only this enhance the life quality in the family, but also supports to increase countries economy as well as the savings of the higher income citizens which can invest for the country developments. For instance, recent research done at Australian Economy Society reveals high salary earnings involve for 60% of the Australian economy in 2017.
On the other hand, when a group of people get a remarkably high salaries demotivate people for the work who are below to this level. The inefficient lower income work force cause for the economy decline in the country. Moreover, when the states impose the certain level for salaries, People do not aim for goals as they do not capable to exceed an appropriate earning level. The recent study done at Norway Economical council suggests when the citizens are limited to a certain level of their salaries can be decline the motivation for the job work accounted 80% in 2016.
To conclude, some countries are having a little number of higher salary employees that helps to improve the country’s economy as well as the individual’s economy growth. However, other people who are agree to assign a limit to the higher salaries believe it has benefits but I think that has more negatives including demotivate employees and economy decline in the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...good earning prove the stability of the families economy earning without making any fina...
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Line 13, column 203, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...s economy growth. However, other people who are agree to assign a limit to the higher s...
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Line 13, column 211, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...y growth. However, other people who are agree to assign a limit to the higher salarie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19191919192 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77412064123 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501683501684 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7969534658 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294031196875 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115114054115 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662952138086 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189560214215 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625988820877 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.