Some People think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
While some argue that it is responsibility of government to take necessary actions to prevent crime, others take the view that people's role in crime prevention is significant. I believe that it is a primary role of the governments to offer a safer place to live.
On the one side of the argument, there are people who contend that individuals have to take appropriate measures to protect themselves from crime. The most compelling reason for believing this is that home security preventive measures are highly efficient. For example, there are many homes nowadays built with high-tech security equipment like surveillance cameras, digital door lock system. These devices instantly alert the resident if there is a suspicious activity outside the permise. Therefore, such installation of security devices for every home is only possible by individuals not by the government.
In spite of the above argument, I am of the view that the government's action is more important in crime prevention. This is because they have both infrastructure and facilities to deterrent crime activities. When there is a stringent enforcement system and harsh punishments for criminal activities, there will be less occurance of offences. For instance, crime rate in Singapore is only 4% this is because the hefty fines and strict punishments by the law and enforcement system of Singapore. It is evident that the governments involvement in crime prevention is proven and more efficient.
In conclusion, while both the views are commonly held in society, I think the government's role in crime prevention is more significant. This is because the authorities have facilities to provide a safer community to the general public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ove argument, I am of the view that the governments action is more important in crime preve...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...em of Singapore. It is evident that the governments involvement in crime prevention is prov...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...e commonly held in society, I think the governments role in crime prevention is more signif...
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Line 13, column 221, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ies to provide a safer community to the general public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35055350554 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08298111225 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538745387454 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4017715918 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263763685911 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804721564466 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613325999588 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151084412752 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048194072551 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.