The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The plans demonstrate the layout of a university sports centre now and its’ layout after the redevelopment.
As can be seen from the two layouts, the pool and seating arrangement will be same as before. The gym will be in the same location but it will be extended. In the location of current outdoor courts in the western side will be a pleasure pool. The outdoor pool on the other side will be replaced by a sports hall. The reception will be as it is now. There will be two additional changing rooms at the south-western and north-western corners of the area. One of them will be attached to the pleasure pool and the other will be just outside the sports hall. There will be two dance studios in the redevelopment process. There will be a cafe just beside one of the changing rooms. A sports shop is also in the plan which is supposed to be located just by the other additional changing room. Comparing the two layouts, it is clear that the overall area of the sports centre will increase after the redevelopment. This way, the whole sports centre will be inside one large complex.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...on the other side will be replaced by a sports hall. The reception will be as it is no...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... and the other will be just outside the sports hall. There will be two dance studios i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55837563452 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63045077944 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451776649746 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8353155689 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0769230769 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261116235543 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131835639465 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140166631227 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375354770635 0.15604864568 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200944440967 0.0819641961636 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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