graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country
The graph illustrates the number of four kinds of food consumed in a European country namely fish, lamb, beef and chicken over the 25-year period from 1979 to 2004.
Overall, the consumption of chicken increased while that of others tends to decrease. What stands out of the graph is that the fish consumption was the lowest of all over this period.
As regards to the lines of chicken and lamb, they have the same starting figure in 1979 at about 150. However,it was obvious that the trend of them was entirely different. the figure for chicken went up fluctuately and reached a peak at over 250 in 2002. the number lamb, which was consumed dropped to approximately 65 in the end of this period
The fish consumption had a steady decrease. the figure in 1979 was about 60 and the final figure is 45 in 2002. By contrast, the consumption of beef falls dramatically to 180 in the first three years of the period then rose to 240 in 1984. Subsequently , the figure went down and bottomed out at 105 in 2002.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ing figure in 1979 at about 150. However,it was obvious that the trend of them was ...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e trend of them was entirely different. the figure for chicken went up fluctuately ...
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Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...and reached a peak at over 250 in 2002. the number lamb, which was consumed dropped...
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Line 13, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...fish consumption had a steady decrease. the figure in 1979 was about 60 and the fin...
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Line 13, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d then rose to 240 in 1984. Subsequently , the figure went down and bottomed out a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6043956044 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50865502914 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4668079093 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138548293636 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535179528736 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684089271564 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105916217335 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765758904905 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.