The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include:
– A brief introduction of yourself
– Your experience and relevant skills
– Why you want the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
Reference to library job advertisement which I have seen on your school career, I would like to introduce my expertise and knowledge along with experience related to particular job. Please allow me.
my name is muhammad musa. my qualification is MBA management and completed my degree in Jan-2003. After that I started worke in IMCB college, Islamabad as senior librarian since sep-2004 to dec-2007.
my key responsibilities were data storages in system, update inventory & auditing. along with that I was responsible to ensure the availability of new books in the library. I have expertise in MS office, Auto cad, Viso 2010, managing supported software.
I am very hard working and passionate to complete my duties. I am qualified person, I always wish to continue my struggle to move forward and look into scope of work.
I hope you will give me this opportunity .
Kind regards,
muhammad musa
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| 2019-10-12 | Muhammad Musa | 61 | view |
| 2019-10-12 | Muhammad Musa | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: My
...o particular job. Please allow me. my name is muhammad musa. my qualification...
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Suggestion: My
...llow me. my name is muhammad musa. my qualification is MBA management and com...
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Suggestion: My
...rarian since sep-2004 to dec-2007. my key responsibilities were data storages...
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Suggestion: Along
...in system, update inventory & auditing. along with that I was responsible to ensure t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g and passionate to complete my duties. I am qualified person, I always wish to c...
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Suggestion:
...rward and look into scope of work. I hope you will give me this opportunity...
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...nd look into scope of work. I hope you will give me this opportunity ...
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...I hope you will give me this opportunity . Kind regards, muhammad...
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Suggestion:
...ou will give me this opportunity . Kind regards, muhammad musa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41059602649 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0223369949 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.761589403974 0.547539520022 139% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2188298858 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0833333333 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766572724934 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190682509885 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539837593701 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457638023724 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759769775918 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.3012195122 89% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.21 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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