More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
As the cost of cars is rapidly decreasing with the advancement in technology and material science, many people today can own a private car. This makes the majority of them considering the car as the main transportation way. I will explain how that, more dependence on cars, can lead to health and traffic problems, and then I will suggest some solutions.
The first problem of over-reliance on cars in transportation is related to health. As cars require the driver to sit all the time without having the possibility of moving his body, this would affect the circulation of blood to different organs. For example, recent research conducted by the institution of healthcare has reported that most of the drivers are suffering from weakness in their muscles. Moreover, people depending on cars in transporting would become less active and have difficulty walking for only short distances.
Another problem is associated with causing negative effects on traffic. Increasing the number of cars in cities, which is a result of the dependence of more people on cars, would lead to traffic congestion on a wide range. This would affect the productivity of people as they reach their work late and tired. Besides, increasing cars means more air pollution, which governments trying to reduce.
The first solution to these drawbacks can be spreading awareness of the problems of too much driving. This would encourage people to walk for their short-distance work and do more exercise to compensate for the time of driving. Another solution could be establishing more underground trains which will reduce the pressure on traffic and the causes of pollution.
In summary, depending on cars can lead to health problems as well as traffic congestion and more pollution. Informing the drivers about these drawbacks and enhancing public transportation could solve the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91627425932 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9423933075 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308692677207 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10059002573 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625767824223 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17122719186 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480778737297 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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