Most people prefer to eat ready meals rather than home made food these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, in the cities, We easy see the fast food or buy ready food on the super markets. With the busy work, most people prefer to eat ready meals rather than home made food.
first, ready food is really useful. When you have busy work and don’t have time to cook for you and your family, ready food is not bad choice. You can go to the super market near your home and buy every dish which you want for your dinner. In Hanoi, you can buy food which so delicious at the famous restaurants and take to your home. With quality and hygiene controlling and dish usually is changed, you can change your meals and your meal will usually delicious, new and healthy. With the development of internet, Facebook and app order food, you even don’t go to the super market and restaurant to buy food, you can stay at home and order every dish that you want and dish is shipped really fast to your home. And I think good face of ready food is convenient.
With convenient, ready food has some problems. Sometime, you can buy dishes at the bad restaurant and store and you don’t know about quality and hygiene of them. We are know that fast food is not good for our healthy, too because fast food has so much salt, cholesterol. We will have so many problems for your heart and healthy if we eat so much fast food.
Buy or not buy ready food depend your choice, but you must consider quality and hygiene of them and limit to buy fast food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38661710037 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11081065488 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453531598513 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4257744442 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20034396027 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107287522372 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129903261562 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177309670491 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148252342644 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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