You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
Dear John,
I’m writing this letter to tell you about the house to which our family moved-in recently. You know that I got a job offer in Bangalore so our family shifted here last month.
The house we moved-in is quite close to where I work. It’s an independent house with 2 floors . We stay in the ground floor which is a 2 bedroom house and the first floor is a duplex-ed 3 bedroom portion. The house is quite spacious and we could fit-in all the big furniture we bought with us. There is a parking spot to keep your 2 wheeler within the compound , where I park my bicycle.
The neighbourhood is also quite good , with lot of Tamil families around. The convenience store is just a walk away and grocery store is also quite close from our house. The house is just a 200 feet away from the bus stop so it’s a very convenient to find a bus to bus stand or railway station whenever you want.
Our stay here won’t be complete without you visiting us. I’m free in all the weekends next month . Please come to our home with your brother and we can go to a movie in mall which also not far from our house. I am expecting your reply on the letter, more than that I am expecting your arrival soon. Awaiting your response.
With Love,
Bala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I'm writing this letter to tell you...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pos;s an independent house with 2 floors . We stay in the ground floor which is a ...
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Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... keep your 2 wheeler within the compound , where I park my bicycle. The neig...
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Line 11, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... The neighbourhood is also quite good , with lot of Tamil families around. The ...
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Line 11, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ore is also quite close from our house. The house is just a 200 feet away from the ...
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Line 15, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...os;m free in all the weekends next month . Please come to our home with your broth...
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Line 17, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Awaiting your response. With Love, Bala
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43404255319 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31863350779 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570212765957 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4962101401 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.125 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180602137631 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581553521021 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591427805467 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10954508446 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692791284549 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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