Even though globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten.
Present argumentation to highlight your opinion on this matter. Give reasons and specific examples to support your opinion(s).
It can be denied that globalization is now in connection with many economic prospects in both wealthy and destitute countries. Some people have strong belief that this tendency brings the positive signals on a global scale while others argue that the globalization effect will undoubtedly make the world change in a inferior way. This essay will discuss two sides of the problem’s impacts on economy worldwide.
There are a wide range of reasons why the globalization plays a vital role in economic policies of most nations, especially the developing ones. To begin with, trade and travel around the world could have become easier thanks to the tight unity and cooperation between vast of areas. For instance, the air route travel can be shortened as much as possible and it is a positive factor to encourage the smokeless industry, which is the forte of developing countries. In addition, it is clear that when many countries participate to some world’s economic forum as WTO, ASEAN, etc as a result of globalization, more and more job opportunities will be available for labours because movement can be loosened, customers can use branded international products in their countries without ponder about the additional tax fee. All of the mentioned benefits increased dramatically the revenue for single countries and the income for all individuals in the deleloping nations.
On the other hand, rich countries can allure foreign talented intellectuality to move to their countries and devote enthusiasms, so globalization can be seen as the main reason causing brain-drain. Brain drain has become a common phenomenon observed throughout all the developing countries, the fact that talented people migrate to delevoped countries where the living standards and treatment are far better than their poor countries results in the serious lack of talent to develop the nation. Beside, environment also extremely influenced because of globaliztion. In spite of developed tourism, local people tend to ultilize attactions by doing their own business and ignore reservation so the environment is dangerously harmed.
In conclusion, everything has both advantage and drawback, and globalization is not an exception. Nation’s governments should have a suitable solution to help their countries cope with globalization effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a inferior way" with adverb for "inferior"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ut ponder about the additional tax fee. All of the mentioned benefits increased dramatical...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50555555556 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12234949325 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3185122111 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.571428571 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126980393509 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453843824933 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036318280447 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086270995877 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048200063845 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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