You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter, explain
• Why you have changed the job
• Describe your new job
• Tell him/her your other news
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirits. It has been a long time since we talked to each other because personal and professional engagement keeps me busy all the time.
As you know, I have been working for Eicher Tractor limited since 2009. However, I quit the job last month because the job was tiring and cumbersome. Apart from that, there was no hike in salary from last two years and I had faced problems while commuting due to distance.
Now, it is my immense pleasure to share with you that I joined Bharat training limited a few days ago. It is a quite fascinating and challenging profession that I have been dreaming of since my graduation. I am jubilant and doing well there.
Last but not least, I would like to share a few things more with you. First, our company is going to conduct a short-term training program for CAD designing. Moreover, I am not only engaged but also getting married next month. Don’t worry, I will send you an invitation card very soon.
At last, tell me what is happening in your world and how things are going? Convey my warm regards to your parents and hug Hanu.
Your friend,
Jai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts and hug Hanu. Your friend, Jai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57746478873 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38578966583 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68544600939 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3776124593 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216365095806 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691863290912 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065634193097 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958207707678 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320155489089 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.