Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that students should self-fund their tuition fee because it is them who are most benefited from education. Although I agree that education opens up broad-based opportunities for individuals, I do not support the idea that students must pay all cost of study.
On the one hand, it is true that graduates have much more promising careers compared to those who not attending schools because students are well equipped with work-ready skills and have broader knowledge. Schools are believed not only offer students with academics but also create an environment for everyone to self-grow from extracurricular activities and establish networking. For those reasons, it is compelling to call tuition fee a worthy investment for the future. In addition, if students have to pay for their cost of study, they will be more motivated to work harder to make the most of what they have paid a high price for. Therefore, therefore, their academic results will certainly improve.
On the other hand, it is not only students who can gain from education. Once joining the workforce, students who are well-trained can work at higher efficiency and therefore, make more profits for the companies. As a result, both the employee and enterprises pay higher tax because they have higher incomes. Funding for education, without doubts, brings about a huge amount of money for the governments to ensure social welfare. Another reason why tuition fee should be covered is that not everyone is privileged enough to afford the full cost of study. Making education inaccessible to the impoverished means restricting the development of prospective individuals.
In conclusion, while I cannot deny the benefits each individual gets from their education, I hold the belief that society also gains from high-quality workforces and should provide financial support for their education.
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- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opi 78
- Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3367003367 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89892928447 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3359162462 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.214285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274228088148 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890382582532 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616553586004 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179156868899 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638748637393 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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