do you agree or disagree? in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use that there are today
One of the most indispensable issues our globe is facing nowadays is regarding the increasing number of cars and automobiles so far, which has led to many fatal problems. However, a controversial question regarding whether the quantity of cars is yet to be expected grow in the next 20 years or not has remained in doubts. I to some reasons believe that in near future the people of universe will have controlled and reduced the amount of automobiles for at least the sake of saving the planet earth.
Firstly, one of challenges our environment is facing is global warming. Global warming is a condition in which the universal temperature rises and disturbs the natural activities. As many people know cars regardless of the waste they produce when they are demolished, they emit many undesirable gazes which have bad impacts both on humans and our surroundings. A procedure that could address this problematic phenomenon is to reduce the number of gasoline cars. Although the world is trying to exchange the gasoline cars with more ecofriendly automobiles witch use hydrogen and solar energies, they will not be enough to fill the number of gasoline cars, due to simple reason which is the high prices of these cars, therefore people would rather use public transportation instead of new presented cars
Secondly, one mainly reason upon which I ponder that the number of cars will diminish is that the price of petrol is rising as well as other alternative energies. European people are adopting to using bicycles instead of cars because the price petroleum is high, in such cases people would prefer to commute with bicycles. This casual day life had led to a cultural revolution and less and lesser people are expected to drive a car let alone buying one.
Finally, another equally important reason which could be led to car’s reduction is that authorities are improving public transportations to newer and more efficient ones, due to these reason it is predicted that less cars will be driven in streets. A recent statistical analysis has shown that although the number of cars have grown in last 20 years, the ratio of total cars in second decade compared to what was in the first decade had a bit of lesser growing and it is regarded to the improvement of public transportation had through these years.
To conclude, based on aforementioned reasons one could realize that because of global warming and the high price of petrol, it can be foretold that the number of cars will not increase by the next 20 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ue to these reason it is predicted that less cars will be driven in streets. A recen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91822429907 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72413875548 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509345794393 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.595285966 48.9658058833 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.923076923 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9230769231 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168191770678 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581220004287 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508409727233 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10355294211 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00851875660047 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 11.7677419355 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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