You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to appreciate your efforts in making my aunt’s birthday party a success.
The birthday was celebrated on 25th December, Friday, at your Grand view hotel. Although I booked the reservation quite late, your staff did not was not disappoint me with any last-minute requests.
The party was organized at the garden near the Roman fountains. The arrangements were immaculate, and every detail was taken care with precision. The minimalist decor of lavender and roses with the warmth of bonfire provided additional comfort. There were around 100 guests, and all of them appreciated the variety and taste of the food served. The collective idea of your staff members to greet guests with welcome drinks is a hit; I am sure from now on, people will follow this gesture at their celebrations.
I would especially like to mention Mr Tom, one of your servers, who went the extra mile to make this party memorable. He served everyone with a smile and fulfilled all the needs from hot water to wheelchair assistance. If it were not his extra efforts, then this celebration would not have been a success.
Yours Faithfully,
XXAZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disappointed'.
Suggestion: disappointed
... quite late, your staff did not was not disappoint me with any last-minute requests. The...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y detail was taken care with precision. The minimalist decor of lavender and roses ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02564102564 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73639603272 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682051282051 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0835432403 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211448246247 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721070386645 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674742725011 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133874430559 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05191060224 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.