Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
'Enjoyment of life' is a very ambiguous term which can be interpreted in many ways. Many believe that enjoyment of life means indulging in revelry, merry-making or party life, but is it all to understand the essence of life? Does savage parties, merry-making can only be considered the ways to enjoy life? Most of the people, particularly the young generation believe that this is the way to live life and enjoy it to the fullest. However, if we see closely into the life of happy people, onw thing is observed that is they enjoy the small and little things in life, like old people do. Hence, it is not right to say that younger people enjoy more than old people.
First, it is necessary to decide, what is the enjoyment of life referring to? Is it just going to parties and having fun? or going to foreign trips with friends? or is it enjoying the little things in life? Enjoyment of life can be subjective to different individuals and cannot be defined by a single definition. For example, for a teenager, enjoying life can can mean to going out with friends, parties, having fun, studies etc, but the same level of enjoyment can be felt by an elderly Grand-father who is playing and spending time with his grand-son/grand-daughter. So, there is no way to determine that the level of enjoyment felt by the grandfather is lesser or higher than the any teenager.
Secondly, enjoyment of life can have different interpretation according to the age group. For a ten year old kid, enjoyment can mean playing with is toys, for a teenager it can mean to hang out with friends, for a middle aged guy, it can mean to be happy in relationship and for a older guy, it can mean to spend time in a sacred place meditating or enjoying the bucolic aspect of the country. the thing is that, one cannot actually determine that any particular age group is enjoying more or less than any other. For instance, an elderly couple may be more happy with their than a spoiled teenager or it can be that elder guy is suffering from any chronic disease and hence is not able to enjoy his elder life.
In fact, there had been examples of older people enjoying life in a better and safe way as compared to young people. Some, might think that elder people have limited capabilities because of the physical disadvantage they face,but this does not mean that they are enjoying their life any less. For example, my Grand-father is always active in in trying new things in his life and always ready to play with me and my younger brother than my father, as my father is always busy in his work.
Thus, it is not right to categorize that older guys enjoy life any less. It is a subjective philosophy and can differ from person to person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58691206544 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66612870482 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435582822086 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1271766965 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.954545455 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2272727273 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354157579428 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12436562485 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887378749003 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208196308847 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969977211039 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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