Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory of higschool programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger students
It is argued that voluntary activities should be included in the high school curriculum. This essay agrees with that suggestion for its great benefits. The essay will first look at how volunteering provides helps pupils grow their positive personalities and then discuss how partaking in social extracurricular create meaningful memories with their classmates.
Taking in voluntary activities should aid students to develop positive characteristics. Once they contribute to the community and their contribution is highly recognized, they might experience a satisfying and happy feeling for their performance. Regularly, willing to help gradually becomes a habit and later becomes their personalities. For example, I used to join a charity organization that provide free meals for the homeless. After witnessing the suffering of these lives, I would never waste my food.
Together doing meaningful tasks can result in unforgettable memories. Children love joining community outdoor activities rather than sitting the whole day in the boring class. When they are getting older, they might not remember how many scores they get in the final exam, whereas, they will remember funny and meaningful moments that they spend together. My local authorities used to launch a growing tree campaign in our neighbourhood, and we the children of this area were so excited to be involved in this activity. As a consequence, whenever I come across these trees I suddenly smile and think of these precious moments.
In short, I strongly believe that a high school curriculum should involve voluntary activity for its great benefits. It not only assist students in the development of individual personality but also makes their students’ lives more colourful and meaningful.
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| 2019-10-23 | Ha Ngoc Hong Gam | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, so, then, whereas, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6037037037 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07284446626 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5040651651 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121370782588 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043533230215 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445316410247 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826967885824 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044266865647 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.