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For summer vacation, which book I will choose to buy
1) Novels
2) magazines
3) Coursebook
Although many students will consider buying novels and magazines for summer vacation. I would choose coursebook instead. I have several reasons to support my view which I will explore in this essay.
The first and foremost reason to purchase this coursebook is high cost. I wanted to buy a coursebook name brock biology since I was in class tenth but I could not purchase because I did not have sufficient money to buy it, It was costly. Given that I do not have much money to spend on magazines and novels so I would prefer to save that money and I will buy Brock biology.
Another major reason is buying a coursebook is always a good investment because you can use it during your summer vacation. For example, When I was at my graduation I went to my grandmother’s place to spend my vacation and there are not a single library or internet facilities but I had several books with me which I used to complete my summer projects. Therefore, I personally think that the coursebook is very advantageous for students. Moreover, newly purchased books always make me feel to study so it is better to buy the book which is related to courses and classes because then I get motivated to study.
To sum up, buying course books instead of magazines or novels are advantageous for those who have a limited amount of money to spend on and for those who gets easily motivated to study after purchasing the new books and I believe that I am the person “ who”.
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| 2019-10-25 | Kumari Soni | 66 | view |
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...y to buy it, It was costly. Given that I do not have much money to spend on magaz...
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...so I would prefer to save that money and I will buy Brock biology. Anoth...
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...books and I believe that I am the person ' who'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65648854962 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69888084422 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530534351145 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.250294626 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327644396401 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128467011283 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672016937603 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206432265787 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985468707244 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.