In many countries people working in sport and entertainment earn much more money than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies? Do you consider it good or bad?
Nowadays, in many countries, people in the field of sports and entertainment are highly paid than the people who work as doctors, nurses and teachers. This essay will discuss the reason for such occurrence in many societies and gives the opinion.
People have a different views for different career. Sportsmen and movie artists earn more money because of their popularity. Let us consider sports like football, many business people consider it in a business aspect. This is because they invest less money on them and earn more using their name and fame. Hence, the professionals are paid enormously . For instance, Nike company contracted Cristiano Ronaldo just for making two or three advertisements and paid him a million dollar. They could have used some other sports person but why Ronald? The reason is, Ronaldo is more famous than any other players in the world at present.
On the other hand, professions such as doctor and teaching are considered as service to the society. Being a doctor or a teacher is not a bad job. They may not earn the name and fame but they earn the trust from the people in the society. Even the highly paid sports person or the artist has to come to a doctor if he meets an injury. For example, a doctor can save many number of lives which a sportsman cannot. So they should not worry about their income. Hence, professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers should never compare their career with people working in sports and movies.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason doctors and teachers are paid less than the people in sports and entertainment. My opinion is that doctors and teachers should not feel bad about their occupation or income because service is different from business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92881355932 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5131138886 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522033898305 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8982975258 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5263157895 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259165675512 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770951082663 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673054250825 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167383493282 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643387788006 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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