Today more people are overweight than ever before.
What in your opinion are the primary causes of this?
What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?
Obesity has been a major concern nowadays since the proportion of overweight people is increasing day by day. The main reasons are dietary problems and lack of physical activities. In order to uproot this problem people should be made aware of the situation and the dangers of it, with establishing facilities to fight it.
In ancient times obesity was not very common in the society mainly because of the healthy and balanced diet ancient people used to consume. They were also involved in various types of physical activities which prevented them to become overweight. But with time, our food consumption has changed a lot. People are not aware of the food they are having anymore because they are much more concerned about other aspects of life. As a result they are consuming processed and unbalanced diet that leads to obesity. Also, with the development of modern technology, we do not perform as much physical activities as our ancestors used to do which is another major contributor to the increase in the number of overweight people.
In order to fight this huge problem, people should first be aware of this epidemic. Because to solve a problem first we have to recognize it. Furthermore, people should be informed about the dangers of obesity which include serious health problems that may even lead to premature death. Besides recognizing, it is important to prescribe people the ways to prevent it, such as healthy diet and the requirement of some sort of physical exercises. And to encourage people for engaging in physical activities the authorities should arrange facilities like parks, gymnasium, swimming pools etc for the public.
So to conclude, we have identified the main reasons of overweightedness today and also the steps that can be taken in order to overcome it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...should first be aware of this epidemic. Because to solve a problem first we have to rec...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t can be taken in order to overcome it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05723905724 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73948299634 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9378375959 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144638961769 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479903678116 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548344978432 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999959318115 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334345269779 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.