The diagram below show the production of a lead pencil
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing of a lead pencil.
Overall, the production entails twelve steps, starting from the growing the trees and ending with the complex product. Evidently, as we can see, the process could be divided into additional two stages, wich include 4 of them, of cultivating trees themself, and 8 of the producing in the manufactories.
The first line depicts, that it takes 4 month for saplings until the replanting, and then, approximately after 3 years trees are become thinner. after the next 14 years of growing, wood is felled and transported to the manufactories, where thin 'slats' are produced.
then, when the slats were treated, it takes 60 days make grooves and connect black leads with a glue. As a result of adding extra new slat on the top, the construction in the shape of sandwich is now formed. The next stage entails hard-pressing with heating the 'sandwich' and then, the special machine cuts all slats; following the step, where future pencils are painted, sharpened and stamped. Finally, the product, that has seen about 18 years to be done, is almost available for all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... of the producing in the manufactories. The first line depicts, that it takes 4 ...
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Suggestion: months
...The first line depicts, that it takes 4 month for saplings until the replanting, and ...
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Suggestion: After
...after 3 years trees are become thinner. after the next 14 years of growing, wood is f...
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...ctories, where thin slats are produced. then, when the slats were treated, it ta...
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Suggestion: Then
...here thin slats are produced. then, when the slats were treated, it takes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09625668449 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77745588674 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0640499692 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151258971068 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741328476244 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115139769482 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13502291982 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145691776251 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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