The only way to improve safety on our roads is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree?
An increasing number of cars on the road and traffic accidents are the widespread concerns of major cities and towns today. A popular remedy to tumble the violation acts on the road is by punishing drivers who offended. However, I believe authorities have to adopt certain other measures too, for the same.
To begin with, as the saying prevention is better than cure, several nations have their own complicated rules and regulations to assure safety on roads. For instance, Micronesia and some European countries hold the reputation of high safety on roads, worldwide. This is because of their adequate rules for driving licenses and improved infrastructure. Hence, road fatalities are occurring due to the lack of these facilities that which we can see in developing and poor countries like India. Furthermore, a separate effective traffic control systems would be a beneficial factor for all metropolitan areas to reduce congestion, accidents and to protect pedestrian travellers.
Admittedly, it is generally accepted that due to the detrimental effect of stringent laws of punishment for traffic rule violators had proven effective to curb the number of occurrences. For example, in the Middle East countries such as Saudi Arabia is ideally successful in this way. Nevertheless, this system would not help to avert the accidents, which drivers do inadvertently. This can be achieved along with efficient traffic control force, traffic regulations and road systems.
In conclusion, from the aforementioned facts and reasons, it is clearly evident that the enactment of strict punishment is not only sufficient to improve safety on the roads but also the requirement of traffic control staff, high effective rules and road systems are needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the number of occurrences. For example, in the Middle East countries such as Sau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, nevertheless, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42700729927 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98611746986 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.224141417 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208420283977 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06872430578 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039215556576 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126437869052 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243226398842 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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