The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
The graphs present the data of children sport spending trend monthly in the UK from 2008 to 2014, and the number of three sports participants during the same period.
In general, there was an upward trend in the number of sport participants over time and the money spending pattern appeared to reflect this trend.
Football was clearly the most attractive sport to children with the number of players always ranked highest among three sports. This number rose from 7.5 million in 2014 to a high of approximately 9 million in 2014. Swimming seemed to keep its attraction quite steady to children, stably raised from under 2.5 million participants in 2008 to roughly 3 million by 2014. By contrast, the number of children registering for athletics had remarkable growth, turning it from the least favorite one before 2010 to the second popular sport only following after football in 2011. The participant number of athletics even reached a peak of 5 million in 2012 before slightly tailing off.
Regarding the sport spending trend, a steadily continuous increase has been shown during the recorded period, rising from only 20 pounds per month for a child in 2008 to an over of 30 pounds on average at the period end
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, second, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93689320388 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53898345553 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597087378641 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1780081915 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.125 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283537783278 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130927227243 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752702939685 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186772162209 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790966378228 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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