You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend and explain
-why did you move
-Describe the new apartment
-Invite him/her to visit
Dear Jason,
I feel so sorry that I could not inform you earlier regarding my sudden shifting to new apartment. In fact, I already shared with you how tough it was becoming for me to attend my new office from my old house. Moreover, I recently found a very attractive house so close to my office that it takes only 15 minutes on card to reach the premise and I did I didn’t want to miss such opportunity. So hear I am, writing this letter from my new living place.
My new house appears to be a house that I dreamt in my life. There is a gym as well as a swimming pool nearby. I already saved almost 2 hours-a-day and planning to start both of the activities on rotation. Furthermore, the shopping district is not so far from here, so purchasing anything is convenient. Regarding the interior of the apartment, the owner spent much to paint the interior. What I like most is the spacious living room which can easily capacitate a large famiy reunion, not to mention the beautiful garden with a lot of flower plants in front of the house.
Why don’t you come to my place in the next week? Our last discussion on current affairs is not completed yet, so the garden can be a good place for us to complete the session and start a new one. However, I bet you can’t beat me in swimming, so bring your swim-suit as well.
Please let me know if you can manage to come next week, can’t wait to see you.
Take care,
Tasnim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by. I already saved almost 2 hours-a-day and planning to start both of the activi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, i feel, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4312267658 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53847005892 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8633719747 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166929058884 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547906554905 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489201592144 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103954995074 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471194274832 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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