Some people say that in modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to healthy ad fit if they want to be.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In modern era, the issue in regarding with healthy that is common thought in society. Some people believe that find healthy in globalization day economy that is rally hard, but some people condemn against that perception, they argue that the advancement of technology is significant to assist human for finding healthy. Therefore, this essay would discuss both these arguments in connection with healthy and unhealthy lifestyle in modern era.
The globalization is the result of the best invention through human history, it can be seen that the globalisation leads to the new-way of human for worki...
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that is common thought in society.
that is a common thought in society.
Some people believe that find healthy in globalization day economy that is rally hard
Some people believe that to get healthy in globalization day is rally hard
Sentence: On the other hand, a lot of people argues that in globalization era is easy to find healthy, they believe that the more technology growing, the more benefits occur.
Description: The fragment people argues that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace argues with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: Moreover, the technology bring a benefit such as fitness-tools.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to benefit and such
Sentence: Finally, human in modern era are really easy for finding healthy because of a lot of information in connection with a healthy-food and a gym-facility in office.
Description: The fragment finding healthy because is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace healthy with adverb
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 342 350
No. of Characters: 1743 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.3 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.096 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.002 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.118 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.132 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.336 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.557 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5