Television sports shows such as Olympic are a good source of motivation for youths who do not like to exercise much. To you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, games show attracts many viewers. Some people believe that such programs are a good source of enthusiasm among youths who dislike to workout. This essay will completely disagree with this opinion.
One of the major causes why television shows fail to bring any interest in sports to de-motivated youths is that these programs cannot be reached to the actual target youths who are not spirited. In most cases, any types of games programs usually entice young people who already have a high level of interest in exercise. Therefore, young generations who don't have an interest in games are unlikely to watch any sports shows. According to a survey during the last cricket world cup, more than 95.0% of the viewers of all of the sports programs have a high interest in cricket.
Another critical reason for sports shows’ failure to instill motivation on exercise in youths who usually dislike exercising is that such programs fail to increase awareness of exercise among its spectators. Generally, de-motivation for exercise stems from the lack of awareness on the workout. However, telecasted sports programs hardly provide any message on awareness of exercise to its viewers, failing to motivate young people. To illustrate, my most favorite sports show, namely “Around the Cricket”, rarely have any awareness message.
In conclusion, sports show on television will not surge the motivation for youths because of failing to attract the group of young people who dislike exercise and to soar awareness among its viewers. A voluntary campaign can be conducted in schools and colleges to raise the inspiration for exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3358778626 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73603163758 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526717557252 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7488304001 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307380112764 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112482707032 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855253931659 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194829187736 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398728210177 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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