The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Human always want to keep their foot prints in their respective fields .But sometimes it is not possible to achieve that success in their life time .It is stated that the greatness of people only can be decided after their pass way rather than their living time .In my opinion I mostly agree with this for some reasons .
Firstly ,when people try to acquire success and try to invent something it takes a lot of time,especially in the science field. Some people can invent the thing that he wanted to invent on the first place where as some people reach to other destinations in a delayed phase. It takes plethora of time to invent something worthy for the human kind .Some times if that particular scientist could not finish what he had started in the very beginning ,other people try to finish it after his death .In our world ,we see ample of examples regarding it .For example ,NIcolaus first invented that Sun is the center of the universe .But that time lots of people protested against this theory ,he even faced humiliation in his life time for this unusual invention .But centuries later when Galileo invented telescope ,it was proved that Sun is actually the center of the universe not the earth .And that’s how even after his death ,Nicolaus has got the first credit by discovering such an amazing invention of science.
Moreover ,when people try to invent something new or something unusual from the very first, he or she always face lots of obstacles. People try to prove him wrong or do not want to accept the way it is .For example,when any new law is introduced it takes a lot of time to be implemented in society .But later on as time passes by people understand its value and greatness.Ishwar Chandra is the first person who invented the marriage of widow hindu women which was a taboo on that time .But later on people accept this law and gradually understood the welfare behind it .And this law have been popular in India since then even after his dead .
However ,there are some contradictions with this where people get the desire result or popularity in their living time .In the field of sports or entertainment there are lots of examples regarding it .People recognize them in their life time as a good cricket player or a good singer or an author and people really admire their work .In the form of entertainment people always give credits to their contributions in their living time where as in the long term field recognition is quite arduous .
In our society different people trying to achieve different things from their perspective .And with the contributions of each of them our world is becoming a place for living comfortably .We should always feel gratitude toward these persons as well give their deserving credit for his or her works whether in their lifetime or after death.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77079107505 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52037660371 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480730223124 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 23.0359550562 265% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.899816355 60.3974514979 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 294.0 118.986275619 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.625 23.4991977007 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.375 5.21951772744 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 61.0 7.80617977528 781% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117370449064 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612267354526 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063592011991 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092221397221 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608040576738 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.9 14.1392134831 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 48.8420337079 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 12.1743820225 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 11.2143820225 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.7820224719 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.