Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As a matter of fact, safety has been paramount factor of life quality of humankind. Indeed, when safety is the case, we should consider it from multiple aspects. In other words, safety could be defined based on statistics of crime rate in a society as an external point of view and, also, it has been regarded as a mental state and feeling from psychological perspective. I put my forth in following paragraphs which help us to improve our security in both directions of mental state and in practice.
fundamentally, the importance of preventive actions to reduce the probability of being in danger of criminals can not be denied. preventive actions could be divided into two main categories. Firstly, individuals should increase their awareness and physical skills. Secondly, they should equip their properties with safety systems and arm themselves with defensive utilities. most of offenders misuse victims trust, unawareness or any other security weaknesses to commit their crimes. Actually, criminals always evaluate victims’ situation that is why preventive steps reduce the risk of being in danger to the great extent.
On the other hand, people should enhance their mental state of security up-to-date to be aware of common crime trends. By increasing our knowledge about common high-risk situations in our environment, basically, we could take deterrent steps to prevent such dangers. The flip side of the coin is that most of the attacks are based on victim’s surprise, therefore, if we increase our knowledgeability about such subjects we can markedly reduce the risk of being a victim. it is also of great benefit to us to be more confident which could be reflected in our manner and behavior that is recognizable by others, particularly delinquents. Finally, as I mentioned above, being confident has significant effect to dissuade wrongdoers.
To sum up, in my way of thinking, practical ways to enjoy security are our awareness about common criminal trends, security equipment such as CCTV or security systems and learning martial arts or self defense abilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38738738739 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98558612928 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4570928116 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0709067546527 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249650472463 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225532710716 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440869296692 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150461843116 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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