In some countries, young people at the age of 18 are considered adults and can drive a car, vote and get married, while other countries don't allow it. What age do you think is the best to be considered an adult? Give reasons and examples.
People, around the world, would like to enjoy their freedom at any age they prefer to. They would want to enjoy drinking alcohol, drive any vehicle and get married, without anyone's interference. Some governments allow this freedom to their citizens at a very tender age. Whereas certain governments are against such early freedom and have a higher age limit set to enjoy these rights. The reasons for each country’s government are based on social, political, financial and religious factors.
Many western countries, allow the right to drink, drive and get married at the age of 16. They feel that the younger lot of their society is quite mature and capable to exercise these rights. The youth prefer to stay independent from their parents as they can manage and support themselves financially.
On the contrary, governments of many third world countries are against providing such rights to their citizens at an early age. In such countries, the majority of teenagers and youth still stay with their parents and are emotionally, financially dependent on them for any decision making. The younger generation are unaware of the commitments of married life, repercussions of irresponsible drinking, nor do they have the maturity or capability to drive vehicles. These governments feel that this would cause issues in society in the form of alcoholism, injuries, and deaths due to vehicle accidents and high incidents of divorces.
In my personal opinion, the minimum age to drink, drive and getting married should be 18 years globally. By this age, the individuals would have attained mental and physical maturity, capability, understanding and financial stability to drink, drive or get married at their will.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... high incidents of divorces. In my personal opinion, the minimum age to drink, drive and ge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, third, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31386861314 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80583599808 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5410259111 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17860135077 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071102689791 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568458794848 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119278533105 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273185886971 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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