Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers. Others think that it’s depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Good education is one of the foremost pillars of any individual’s mental and physical development. Certain sections of society believe that success in education solely depends on how good the tutor is. Opposed to this view, are people who concur that only students with a good attitude towards studies have a greater success ratio.
On one hand, there are people who think students can excel if their teachers are learned, well prepared and focused on areas where they struggle. They think that such teachers bring in innovative ways to imbibe knowledge which makes the entire process engaging and interesting for the students. They also devise a planned process to guide the students and have constant followups on their homework and assignments.
On the other hand, others think that the onus lies with the student’s attitude and his own zeal to crack at studies. Such students are self-learners, inquisitive and disciplined towards their approach to education. They educate themselves through various online and offline mediums like the internet, library books as well as network with their friends to help each other.
In my opinion, combined efforts of a learned teacher and a committed student would be the right combination to the path to ultimate results in their quest for excellence.
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| 2019-11-10 | sumit shah | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32535885167 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76723016476 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8220486105 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.3 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221316083121 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822333973557 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071729455302 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1193343533 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100275143354 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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