The chart below shows information about the favourite subjects of 60 students from
two schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and
reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
,
The rendered bar chart illustrates the best-loved subject of 60 puoils of two schools,school A and school B.
Overall, it is manifest that school A experienced a greatest interest in sport than other sybjects.while, craft and drawing subjects were more liked by school B.Initially school A had a lower student, it outraced school B at the end of the period.
At the fleeting glance it is immensely clear that school A, 36 student preferred sport subject which was four times more than those students who liked the science subject.The figure for social science, languages craft drawing stood at 6, 5, 4 students respectively.
In school B, a quarter of student liked craft and drawing subjects which was more than six times the students number of school A.A language was the second most preferred subject in school B, chosen by 18 students.In case of social science subject, a ten of student selected.Science was the least liked subject, accounting for 2 students.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-12-09 | Mya | view | |
| 2019-11-11 | Sarbjeet kaur | 93 | view |
- The graph below shows the types of transport used by tourists who visited New Zealand from five countries in 2004 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant 70
- The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant 68
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. 61
- The graph below shows the percentage of people who travelled by bus in the UK from 2009 to 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , school
...oved subject of 60 puoils of two schools,school A and school B. Overall, it is man...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...t is manifest that school A experienced a greatest interest in sport than other s...
^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Initially
...ng subjects were more liked by school B.Initially school A had a lower student, it outrac...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mmensely clear that school A, 36 student preferred sport subject which was four t...
^^
Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... students who liked the science subject.The figure for social science, languages cr...
^^^
Line 13, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...x times the students number of school A.A language was the second most preferred ...
^
Line 13, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ject in school B, chosen by 18 students.In case of social science subject, a ten o...
^^
Line 13, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Science
...ence subject, a ten of student selected.Science was the least liked subject, accounting...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11875 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99478061592 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0015060104 43.030603864 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.75 112.824112599 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249806344758 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188998651438 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630149446223 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188998651438 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630149446223 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.