Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing sports can teach people lessons about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the most popular and routine ways nowadays lives, is playing sport. Depending on your body’s shape and aptitude, you might be interested in a special sports field, no matter what’s our gender, because opposed to the old fashions women can play football or men can be interested in ballet. While so many people believe playing sport is just a necessary appealing excitement without any notable effect on our lives, I consider it as a hobby which can drastically teach us a lot of lessons. Hereunder I’ll bring my reasons and explanations compelling.
First of all, one of the main goals of playing sports, as FIFA’s slogan was for a year, is “Fairplay”, which propel players toward a fair and impartial play, because maybe winning and gaining victory be momentous but is not the only aim of the match. As a clear example of this reason, I would like to mention a special football match that when one of the teams scored a goal during the time other team’s goal-keeper was injured, they have decided to give the ball to the “goal-keeper injured team” and without any fight and disruption let them score a goal to be same in conditions.
Secondly, as today’s lives are congestion and accelerate in happening, being on-time and respecting laws are appreciably important. Here one of the other main importance of the need for playing sport and it’s touch in our lives would be clear. Each sport has it’s own law, and by not respecting it you’ll undertake an approximately big penalty. Accustomed to the hazardous of penalties, people prefer to be respected by the laws that are currently in society. For instance, touching and faulting on a player in the penalty area will give the other team a penalty shoot, which may become a goal score for them and a huge loss for your team, by learning of the capability of gaining a huge loss in the case of a little fault in the society and it’s harder effects in comparison with a football match, people learn to be more self-controlled and respected to the laws instead of being self-ruled.
In conclusion, playing sports not only mend our souls through balancing hormones but also we can learn a lot of lessons like the aforementioned ones. Maybe there still exist players that are immoral, but they are not the majority of players, and as morality is one of the main reasons each federations each year consider a separate prize for it, it’s one the appreciable values of the society that can be gained through sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, as for, as to, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91415313225 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94474609195 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538283062645 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.490230793 48.9658058833 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.923076923 100.406767564 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1538461538 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13215765552 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579511584138 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353355504397 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932429555667 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514565548149 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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