Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults.Why is this?Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays young people prefer to spend their free time shopping. In this essay,we will discuss some factors this is considered as popular activity and also the effects of this new trend.
The commercial advertisement is one of the reasons for many people getting attracted to the product. Whenever a new product is released the company puts an attractive ad and the young generation spends a lot of time knowing about the new features of that and then buying it. However, this does not stop here after buying it once the company releases the new version of the product the same continues. For example, every near apple releases the new phone with the great launch and many people buy the people but after a year when they release the new version of the phone people gets attracted to new features and buy the same. Another reason is the new shopping policies. With try and buy features in many online shopping sites adults spend a lot of time trying the product before they decide what to buy.
Spending free time on shopping has many disadvantages then than the advantage. The main disadvantage of this is unnecessary spending money. With spending more time shopping young people end up wasting money on the things that might not be necessary. Another effect of this on adults is wasting time which they can utilize to learn any hobby that might help them in their future.
In conclusion, although the availability of many choices in products might useful sometimes, this will leads to spending unnecessary time in comparing and buying the product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun shopping seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much online shopping', 'a good deal of online shopping'.
Suggestion: much online shopping; a good deal of online shopping
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90188679245 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46384753543 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51320754717 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5075154178 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156194797575 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709507800154 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500083794914 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117327993058 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521803909616 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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