You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
describe the training course you want to do
explain what the company could do to help you
say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear sir,
I am writing this epistle to you in connection with an online advertisement which invited interested professionals to book their seat for a course called a customer service through the customer’s eyes. I think this course will be very beneficial for me to excel in my current job, therefore I am hoping that you will permit me to participate in it.
In relation to the specifics of the program, it will be week-long session and will cover every important aspects of customer management including how to transform them into active advocates for service-oriented companies. Besides this, the program will be conducted by Silk-Route, a reputed human resource management company.
The session will commence from 1st July and require prior booking. I am hoping that you would allow me a leave for 7 days to attend the course as they have long-day sessions. Furthermore, I am quite positive that this programme will assist me to learn a new skills and insights on customer management, which I am willing to apply in a company.
Eagerly waiting for your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Milan Desai.
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| 2019-11-11 | Milan Desai | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this epistle to you in conn...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou will permit me to participate in it. In relation to the specifics of the prog...
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ositive response. Yours sincerely, Milan Desai.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20108695652 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02697388302 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.11920481 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272150185062 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111692878933 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579333426046 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161601360219 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547350114888 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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