Describe an important technological product you bought
Honestly, I am a big friend of technology. Therefore, I own several devices and gadgets. Among them, the best thing I like most is my tablet Samsung S6. Like many smart devices, I could get access to the internet to search the information for my job as well as enjoyed the entertainment, up to date the status of my friends and my beloved relatives. Moreover, one particularly evident feature highlighted by this tablet is tools of its smartpen. Because of having a smartpen, this device is my best companion when I have a meeting and an appointment. It supports me to write on the screen and send to my colleagues conveniently by email. Thanks to the translation function of the smartpen, my English improved by frequent reading English book. Even this tablet cost to the earth, I've never regretted purchasing because it fulfils my job, my learning as well as my leisure
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| 2023-08-24 | anhthe | 61 | view |
| 2023-05-25 | irina_stoica | 56 | view |
| 2023-05-25 | irina_stoica | 11 | view |
| 2023-04-10 | SandySandy | view | |
| 2022-12-06 | ZAINBM | 67 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 781, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ok. Even this tablet cost to the earth, Ive never regretted purchasing because it f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, moreover, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 152.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93288263557 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4883116846 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.013044076486 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00578994839672 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0163764470962 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.013044076486 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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