Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but no local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
In these recent years, the quantity of local visitors of museums and historical sites are significantly decrease, which requires social concerns. In fact, it is not difficult to recognize that vast majority of visitors in these historical stations are foreigners. This status does not only happens in any unique regions, it can be said that this is an international issues.
In the beginning, the first and foremost reason for the fact that historical destination is not insufficient attractive enough for local inhabitants.This can be explain that admiring the appeal of history requires extensive understanding about it and also the patience. Actually, due to the modernization, youngster nowadays is not as interested in books and historic events as the prior generations. This leads to the vigorous increase of a number of young people who lack of knowledge about history and culture of their country.
However, there are some feasible measure to solve this significant issues. Spreading the beauty of history and local culture through movies and songs may capture indigenous people’s attentions. For instance, china, the country has 4000 years of history, every year they display various movies to advertise their history and culture not only to the foreigner but also for the young generation of their country. By this way, the audiences watching the movies are asked to research about their history. Moreover, this also creates the competitiveness in the world market. In more details, the Forbidden city which was a capital city of china is the 20th century attracts a vigorous amount of visitors every day though the influence of their movies and dramas. It is not only visitors from the other countries come to visit the Forbidden city but also their indigenous citizens.
To sum up, we can not ignore the decrease of the amount of local visitors of museums and historical sites so that having affective solutions is emergency required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.303514377 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88706190054 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536741214058 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2104025429 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21731873998 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706056848876 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494233649853 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142668264156 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436352064133 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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