Nowadays most people are not fit and active enough, compared to the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
It is certainly true that masses in these days are not full of beans as well as healthy owing to multifarious reasons. This essay will elaborate on the reasons why this is happening and put forward solutions for this issue in subsequent paragraphs.
Let’s begin by looking at the first and foremost ubiquitous problem is perilous eating habits. In this fast-paced lifestyle and inundated work pressure, folks do not have enough time to cook at home. As a result, they eat outside which is not only genetically modified but also unhealthy and unhygienic as well as contains additives, saturated fats, and sugars. This is the most prominent problem to become lazy and dull in these days. One probable solution for this issue is to cook at home and eat staple food because these foods are healthy.
The other vital cause of this issue is the sedentary lifestyle and lack of physical exercise. With the advancement of technology, availability of internet at every nook and corner, and unlimited numbers of gadgets, life become sedentary. All the time, masses sit in front of the computer and got tired after getting home. After that, they do not have the energy to go out for a walk. The other reason is that folks are working till late at night and do not wake up early for a walk. The solution to this problem is to make a rigid plan for the daily workout. It is also advisable not to sit for more than an hour in front of the computer. Apart from that, try to sleep early and wake up early for exercise.
It is fair to conclude that although many people are not energetic these days because of bad eating habits, dull lifestyle and lack of exercise yet there are many solutions to keep healthy and strong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, apart from, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45885242458 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542763157895 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.267614255 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0776300983117 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267927655048 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034918722219 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484926445737 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196110615513 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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