A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Most people agree with building new factory near our neighborhood so it affects society in different ways.In my opinion, this construction is enormously beneficial to both individuals and society as a whole.I feel this way for two reasons,which I will explore in following essay.
To begin with,building factory make jobs for young people.By employing youth ,life expectancy has increase in society.Another it’s advantage is measure of crime in community become lower.Investigation show that commitment arise of poverty and unemployment.For example, since my brother employ in this factory, he becomes more happy and alive and our family get warmer and we are so hopeful for future.
Secondly,by swink and internal produce money get circle in society and economic recession decreased. Inflation become reduce in community and in large area this decline in country. I read in magazine that, Exactly like this event occurred in the European society,some domestic manufactory developed and by this action most of people get job. Economic problem improved and today we observe results of that happening.
Besides this advantages,some people believe in it’s disadvantages. They think, building factory near hometown have environmental disaster. It’s bustling condition may create traffic and as a result it produce air pollution that can harm health of child and old people, both.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that building factory near our community has positive effects on our lives. This is because youth confidence and improve level of life’s people, and because solving economic difficulties by produce internal things and export them to other place of global.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65882352941 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13312473231 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.533370965 48.9658058833 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.181818182 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126933776846 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049428033649 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439392518724 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726580533252 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195083690264 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 10.9000537634 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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