The Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In this contemporary world, it is impossible to imagine a life without internet. Although, there are numerous benefits of it, it has drawbacks as well. this essay will argue why internet serve as a great source of information with innumerable advantages, despite its disadvantages.
it is a fact that internet has made our lives easier but certain people percept that its regular use in order to get information on various issues has more drawbacks as compared to its benefits. it is because sometimes it shows the unfavorable stuff in the form of advertisements in front of the people surfing it to get information which may influence their mind to get induldged in some kind of unacceptable activities. For instance, while searching about anything on google, it is common to come up with other website links with nudity, porn, et cetera, through ads that can adversely alter the mindset of people, especially youngsters, and encourage them to surf that unusual links. Thus, the use of internet is responsible for the rise in uncommon activities among people of all age groups.
However, I believe that advantages of using an internet outweigh its disadvantages since there is nothing unavailable on it, whether it is linked to education or entertainment. Nowadays, it is very difficult to gather knowledge through books thar are available in libraries of schools, universities, colleges, et cetera. For example, there are novels, thesis, and other that are not available in the libraries as well as bookshops, but they can be found on internet only by putting their names in the search engines. that is why; internet act as a major source of information for everyone.
In conclusion, this essay argued why there internet plays a pivotal role life of people despite its drawbacks. In my opinion, it only depends upon the individual to diffrentiate between correct and incorrect usage of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10289389068 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97864804319 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594855305466 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4908376417 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167761846561 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623361469375 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496294841023 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10616117215 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557112746803 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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