People in the current generation are not fit and active, and it will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue.
Its predicted that health issues will remain higher in the next decades because people becoming inactive and obese nowadays. there are several causes of this phenomenon and plethora steps can be taken to tackle this menace, which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, adaptation of sedentary lifestyle is the major reason for unfit health because current days individuals prefer to do work while sitting and lessen their physical activity which reduced metabolism in body and results in obesity, which is the root of many other health problems like cardiovascular diseases and diabetes. Moreover, these diseases are genetic so it can pass from one to another generation . For instance, a survey conducted in California reveals that people working in banks and offices are 70% more prone to various heart related problems and 30% of worker's children already suffered from obesity . Furthermore, eating fast food is also a primary cause, these days, people have busy schedules and have lack of time to prepare healthy food, consequently, it causes gastrointestinal issues.
Ample solutions are there to curb health problems, firstly, provide awareness among people regarding physical exercises like meditation and walk, in addition to it, people can also be cautioned to avoid street food. preference of bicycle for short distance is also an incredible solution to remain healthy and to reduce pollution. What is more, parents should encourage their children to take part in sports instead of playing computer games.
In conclusion, there are several reasons for ill-health, however,multifarious ways are there to tackle these problems as mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50384615385 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83819883857 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657692307692 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9837662063 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.1 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.3 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279399480726 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922203234688 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460706018906 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158163848949 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258711546471 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.