Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. Others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
In recent decades, the question of whether employees should wear uniforms at work or not has received a great deal of public attention. Although this trend can be harmful in many cases, the benefits will be greater.
There are a number of reasons why people should not wear uniforms. First, since people wear clothes from the company every day, they will feel dull and uncomfortable. In fact, the same clothes will have problems in psychology because they see clothes image that repeats day by day, which will be making their creative low. Second, sometimes that clothes are not fit with their body, or even they do not like company clothes designs, then they will feel uncomfortable and unexpected, which make reduce their productivity, and they will wear their clothes without inform.
There are also a number of reasons why people should wear uniforms. First, in order to the basic authentic identity of employees fast, they are just wearing the clothes of their company. For example, the company should design and make clothes, which protector can see and know the person who is the employee of his company. Second, uniforms are not only authentic but also the face of the company, and they also can make increase values for the company. This means that with a beautiful design, the company can send a text on clothes to everyone and the company will look like more professional.
In conclusion, although People think that employees should not wear uniforms, my own view is that they should wear uniforms when work to bring satisfaction for the company and them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In recent decades, the question of whether employees should wear uniforms at work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96981132075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42895198816 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501886792453 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8455616089 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201284333344 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977656100528 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945869441752 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168773679685 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105193982376 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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