In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places.
Do you agree or disagree?
prohibit smoking in places where are kids in. In this essay first I will talk about how many teenager will have a big chance to be smokers because of watching adult smoking front of them. secondly I will shows how much are children being negatively health effecting in growing by secondhand smoking.
Budy Paragraph #1:
in earlyer age children are usually used to acting like there perants or like adult and when they see them smoking they will copy this hapite. In 2015 there a research from banha universty have done on over than 500 boy and girl shows that 55% of children how have a smoker family member tend to be also smoking while they still teenager.
Budy Paragraph #2:
In the first decate of human life our long still highly sensiteve specially from the emissions because it easy to get in our body even without we notice that and it may cause in athma and it’s one of common rasperatory desise
that allot of children maybe infected with from childhood and to supporting this idea there some researchers from asia come up with evedence from there research that lead to 60% of children has a direct contact with smokers get athma in earlyer age
Conclusion:
There allot of countries prohibited smoking in open area places and I have showed that I’m strongly agree with stopping smokers in front of children in kids area specialy in the summer time because it’s has a dirict impact on they habite and health
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Prohibit
prohibit smoking in places where are kids in. In...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...f watching adult smoking front of them. secondly I will shows how much are children bein...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
... smoking front of them. secondly I will shows how much are children being negatively ...
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Suggestion:
... in growing by secondhand smoking. Budy Paragraph #1: in earlyer age c...
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...ey will copy this hapite. In 2015 there a research from banha universty have done on over ...
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...smoking while they still teenager. Budy Paragraph #2: In the first dec...
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... and it's one of common rasperatory desise that allot of children maybe...
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Suggestion: a lot of
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Suggestion:
...ct with smokers get athma in earlyer age Conclusion: There allot of countrie...
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Line 53, column 184, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...f children in kids area specialy in the summer time because it's has a dirict impact o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01195219124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2895579317 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 258.243048739 49.4020404114 523% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.666666667 106.682146367 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8333333333 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0590253697126 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036865641931 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238953490731 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0330138796521 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283732504637 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.