ou were invited to go out by your friend. Due to some reason you couldn’t go. Write a letter apologizing for this and suggest a new time and place to meet.
In your letter, you should say:
apologies
explain what reasons you can’t make it
suggest a new time and place to meet.
Dear Sania,
Hope you are good! It was really nice to hear from you after long run.
I felt disheartened since I remained unable to attend the dinner party in Chandigarh arranged for you. To be very honest, I was so excited to meet you after ages and planned a lot for the meeting, but all the plans went in vain. I am extremely sorry for my absence.
Actually, on that day, all of a sudden my grandfather got heart attack.Owing to this, I was out of sorts and took him to the hospital instantly. Fortunately, we reached on time and saved his life but in all these I forgot to make you call that I would not reach.
I hope you will understand my condition, for it was literally an unavoidable circumstance. Since you are in India for next month also , I have been thinking to invite you for supper at my home. I believe it would prove to be an appropriate destination for both of us to spend quality time.
I would like to say you sorry once again.
See you soon!
Maria
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Owing
... sudden my grandfather got heart attack.Owing to this, I was out of sorts and took hi...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nce you are in India for next month also , I have been thinking to invite you for ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43243243243 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55454996377 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6788609825 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215371382967 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861926043713 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350702538427 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118163025431 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206698793378 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Owing
... sudden my grandfather got heart attack.Owing to this, I was out of sorts and took hi...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nce you are in India for next month also , I have been thinking to invite you for ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43243243243 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55454996377 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6788609825 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215371382967 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861926043713 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350702538427 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118163025431 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206698793378 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.