The graphs show the figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or college lecture.
hours worked per week and the percentage of people in different occupations suffering from stress related illness
it is clearly that busssiness has the highest time of working among all the jobs but surprisingly that there are only 11 percent of who suffering from stress.
Although lectures works only 15 hours per week , less than other people about 5 to 35 hours it seems like they suffer from stress related illness more than anyone else with 25 percent. Writers have to do more hours than lawyers specifically is 10 hours but there are the same proportions of people in two different occupations suffer from stress, 8 percent.
Progammers are the one who has the less number of peole suffer from stress is 5 percent but they have to work 39 hour per week ,higher than lawyers lectures and chefs. others occupation have the similarity between the time of working and also the percent of human suffering from stress related to illness." style="outline: none; line-height: 1.34;">The chart illustrates the average figures of hours worked per week and the percentage of people in different occupations suffering from stress related illness
it is clearly that busssiness has the highest time of working among all the jobs but surprisingly that there are only 11 percent of who suffering from stress.
Although lectures works only 15 hours per week , less than other people about 5 to 35 hours it seems like they suffer from stress related illness more than anyone else with 25 percent. Writers have to do more hours than lawyers specifically is 10 hours but there are the same proportions of people in two different occupations suffer from stress, 8 percent.
Progammers are the one who has the less number of peole suffer from stress is 5 percent but they have to work 39 hour per week ,higher than lawyers lectures and chefs. others occupation have the similarity between the time of working and also the percent of human suffering from stress related to illness.
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- The graphs show the figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or college lecture. 56
- The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hours
hours worked per week and the percentage of p...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...suffering from stress related illness it is clearly that busssiness has the high...
^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
...but surprisingly that there are only 11 percent of who suffering from stress. Althou...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gh lectures works only 15 hours per week , less than other people about 5 to 35 ho...
^^
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stress related illness more than anyone else with 25 percent. Writers have to do...
^^
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs but there are the same proportions of people in two different occupations suff...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 8 percent. Progammers are the one who has the less number of peole suffer from...
^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...s is 5 percent but they have to work 39 hour per week ,higher than lawyers lectures ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t but they have to work 39 hour per week ,higher than lawyers lectures and chefs. ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Others
...higher than lawyers lectures and chefs. others occupation have the similarity between ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...suffering from stress related illness it is clearly that busssiness has the high...
^^
Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
...but surprisingly that there are only 11 percent of who suffering from stress. Althou...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gh lectures works only 15 hours per week , less than other people about 5 to 35 ho...
^^
Line 11, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stress related illness more than anyone else with 25 percent. Writers have to do...
^^
Line 11, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs but there are the same proportions of people in two different occupations suff...
^^
Line 13, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 8 percent. Progammers are the one who has the less number of peole suffer from...
^^
Line 13, column 115, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...s is 5 percent but they have to work 39 hour per week ,higher than lawyers lectures ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t but they have to work 39 hour per week ,higher than lawyers lectures and chefs. ...
^^
Line 13, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Others
...higher than lawyers lectures and chefs. others occupation have the similarity between ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 965.302439024 173% => OK
No of words: 333.0 196.424390244 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01501501502 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72521782755 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.291291291291 0.547539520022 53% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 283.868780488 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.103766994 43.030603864 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.555555556 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152409073983 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104105460436 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217632763788 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111815820455 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331851379369 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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