write a letter to your new neighbour because you have some problem about his car parking
in your letter
-welcome him her as a neighbour
-explain your problem
-give some suggestions
Dear Mr.Smith
I hope you family and you are doing great. I am so glad to having you family and you as my neighbour and welcome to move to Milford.
I found there are some problems regards to car parking that the former owner did not mention it to you so I would like to tell you. there were two vehicles parked on the driveway last night, which both are widen one. it is difficult for us to passing through the driveway and back home. Not because the room of the path, but also that is public area. we all should respect to others, especially we are neighbour.
I totally understand your house has smaller parking space. Therefore I would like to suggest you park one vehicle on the road which just two minutes walk away. you could tell you friend park in my property if you have visitor come for a short while.
I expect meet you in person.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith I hope you family and you are doin...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r and welcome to move to Milford. I found there are some problems regards t...
^
Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... it to you so I would like to tell you. there were two vehicles parked on the drivewa...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...the driveway last night, which both are widen one. it is difficult for us to passing ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...y last night, which both are widen one. it is difficult for us to passing through ...
^^
Line 9, column 352, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...the path, but also that is public area. we all should respect to others, especiall...
^^
Line 13, column 60, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...d your house has smaller parking space. Therefore I would like to suggest you park one ve...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... road which just two minutes walk away. you could tell you friend park in my proper...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46012269939 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1352690009 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2232783924 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5833333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234134904255 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714130639219 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580513946147 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124503960614 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477197264161 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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