The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given lines illustrate the figure for books read by males and females at Burnaby Public Library in a period of 3 years. It is obvious that men rapidly tended to read far more books than women did in the same period despite the lower beginning.
As can be seen from the graph, in 2011, the number of books read by women was 5000, which is much higher in 2000 than books read by men. After that, there was a gradual increasing trend in the next two year and these figures reached a peak of 9000 in 2013. However, the number witnessed a dramatical fall to 7000 in 2014 - the final year.
In addition, the books read by females at the Burnaby Public Library quickly went up from 4000 to 1000 between 2012 to 2014. It finished at about 14000, which was approximately double with the number of books read by women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...year and these figures reached a peak of 9000 in 2013. However, the number witnes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44736842105 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14836909513 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.4027912375 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31859894819 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14430488041 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849617167849 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220087115052 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511459144556 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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