Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Discribe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
In this contemporary world, there is a heated discussion among people whether death sentence should be imposed on criminals who are engaged in brutal crimes or not. While there are both merits and demerits of capital punishment. I believe that capital punishment is required in the society to maintain law and order.
To begin with explanation, plethora of advantages can be put forward so as to why capital punishment serves a greater purpose than merely announcing some other punishments. Firstly, death sentence is the best method to prevent a society from committing crimes by showing consequences of a criminal action. For instance, in the Saudi Arabia, because of awarding execution as a punishment of robbery and theft, ratio of these crimes are negligible. Secondly, the government spends large sums of money on the maintainance of prisoners in terms of their food, accommodation, health etcetera. When they are imprisoned, these money can be used for the development of the country and its people instead.
What is half full to some may appear half empty to others. Similarly several other people believe that death penalty can be considered as unsuitable punishment due to several factors. First and foremost, it is irrefutable that the most important thing for a person is the "right to live" and no one has the authority to infringe this right, irrespective of a person's deeds. Moreover, people may be punished wrongly due to unstructured judiciary, this can make the citizens lose faith in the judicial system of the country. In addition to this, criminals should be given a second chance to repent on their acts and deeds and change themselves and live in the society.
Agglomerating the discussion done above, although capital punishment has certain demerits, I think that it is essential part of the system which helps in controlling the criminals' fear and it also lessens the burden on the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...lth etcetera. When they are imprisoned, these money can be used for the development of the ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...o some may appear half empty to others. Similarly several other people believe that death...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21974522293 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92059574544 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.775625957 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22772390624 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068102559007 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513831190884 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122579112966 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499544325271 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.